feedback

Are there any areas of the presentation you would like to give any more detail on?
I feel i could more detail on the actual artist because i didnt give much detail so my audeince did not know much about him and his music, apart from that i think i have put enough detail in the pitch, however there was some stuff I wanted to say but couldnt really explain it in words so i could not say it. And also i feel that i was confident however i was mumbling what i was saying so it wasnt very clear so the audeince may not of heard everything i had to say.

What were the strenghtes of my music video idea?
The strengthes of my presentation was that my idea was solid and i knew what i was doing. i also gave good examples and explained the examples and linked it with my ideas well. Another strenght of my work is that i showed m cast properly so people could see whoi they were and what they looked like so they could give feedback on the persaon and they could make a judgement on whether they thought the person could foit the character and archetype they had to fit.

What were the weaknesses?
The weaknesses of my presentation is that my idea for my music video did not really fit the style and genre for my music video which was indie, my idea was more for a RnB or hip hop music video. Another weakness for my prsentation is that my cast didnt really fit the characters they had to play.

What changes would I make to my music video based on my feedback?
I would think about my casting properly so the characters look like they should be there and they fit the characters they are going to play. Also i would speak more clearly and prepare more about what im going to say so all of my ideas and everything i want to say is said and its said clearly so everyone knows what im saying. Also i would think of an idea for my music video that goes with the song more.